Today I decided to pick my 3 major essays for my portfolio
I thought I did pretty swell on those and I pick them because they have personal information about me.
Today I’m revise my review assignment I made a couple of errors, but I’m correcting the mistakes. Making the essay longer and adding more details.
I’m correct the mistakes, I did on this assignment like not breaking down my paragraphs, shorting up my sentences, and the usual the punctuation.
Today, I’m expose to revision The instructions assignment but i did it so good I don’t have to. Because it was pretty easy pick a topic of instructions I did jello pie, I added the ingredients, images, steps. In my opinion its so easy to do.
Today, I’m revise the six word memoir and I notices that I needed to start spell checking my essays. I also noticed that I need to stop running run on sentences.
The things I change was my spelling, organzing my paragraphs, and adding a little bit more detail
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